So, ep 2! I literally just made a post saying this wasn’t going to be out tonight because Rika, Distro Dude Supreme, had magically vanished, and then the lovely CureGecko stepped in and offered to seed, so everything’s swell and awesome, and I think that’s a good state to be in. So, here’s ep 2.
tl;dr Akane is the goddamn best even though it’s hard to write her for long stretches. My mind kind of loses track of how heavily I should be making her Talk Funny.
Speaking of, I got reviewed by Dark_Sage, a person I was completely unaware of before now but totally love the concept of what they’re doing. I’ve tried to take some of that feedback on board – the first ep was rather a rush-job so I’ve put a bit more polish into making sure shit is legible, maybe avoiding some of the more… interesting typesetting practices I use for our toku stuff, etc. The biggest complaint – that I am literally incapable of following the rules of proper English without a capable editor – is reinforced by the fact I am lacking an editor entirely. One will try and make do, however, and soldier on regardless, and I give thanks for the recommendation and compliments.